Author	Thread: Critique me. ;)
Admin	Critique me. ;) Posted : 21 Nov, 2010 07:10 PM I just want a little constructive criticism on my profile. I know I put quite a bit of info in it but I have done the online dating thing on and off for a while and when I wasn�t very specific as to what I want and the type of person I am, I would get guys who I would never be interested in contacting me all of the time. Now that I am being specific�. I still have that problem. I personally think my profile gets my key points across very well but then again�. I am a chick writing something a guy is going to read and everyone knows that men and women process information differently. So�. I need a man�s opinion. Thanks Post Reply
View Profile History	Critique me. ;) Posted : 21 Nov, 2010 08:00 PM To:Jen 454, i first want to say that i might have to make a part two about your profile since you've written a lot in there. to the friendship part "they dump all of thier frustations & feelings on me" is telling me that you are someone who put theier needs last & put who you love first which means to me that you are a very supportive friend-thumbs up for a good man! You also said you're not the woman for the men who is "strictly a meat & potatoes guy" & you "normally put Betty Crocker to shame" I could'nt help but to get some lols out of that! But seriously,you're saying that you're a very creative woman & put her effort to make sure your mans' satisfied with you - another thumbs up fom me! What i get from the "what i want in a man" & in which place to go on a date like "the bar scene" is telling me that you are honest & not afraid to tell the guy who is out there for you what is on your mind -another two thumbs up! All i can say for now is that YOU HAVE the GOOD QUALITIES for a MAN. the only problem is finding him which you MUST PRAY ABOUT. Take care & GOD BLEEEESSS!!!!!!:waving: Post Reply
View Profile History	Critique me. ;) Posted : 21 Nov, 2010 08:58 PM DISCLAIMER: I'm. :goofball: so don't take my reply to serious...but you remember you asked for it! Although it is meant to be humorous, it foes however contain some nuggets of truth.....your welcome! Your profile from a mans perspective: *jen454 = big block chevy *profession = mysterious *pics = need more *likes to make other happy = :-) *doesn't give up = has to win the argument *loves to cook new things = unpredictable meals *likes to fish = :-) *euchre = huh? * have to work at everything = :-( * a bonfire without booze = is that possible? * hmmm, goal oriented = mentioned x 2 * this woman has really br lied to = baggage * liars again in next paragraph = yep right about the baggage * doesn't like animals, pots and bandaids = that's odd * picky, bold and bull headed = and she wants someone like her? * muddin and fishing = but it will cost me dinner first! Post Reply
View Profile History	Critique me. ;) Posted : 22 Nov, 2010 08:08 AM Thank you guys for your input. I really appreciate it and will be making a few changes to what I wrote. Hopefully I will be able to shorten my novel up a bit. :yay: jen Post Reply
View Profile History	Critique me. ;) Posted : 22 Nov, 2010 11:40 AM You listed Muskegon MI as your location, which from Google Maps looks to be out in the country. But you also listed you only want someone from a couple of hundred miles a way. If someone is reading your profile and respecting your wishes, that will automatically severly limit the number of guys available to contact you. Narrow that down by how many guys are in your age range. My guess is it is purely a numbers game. Post Reply