Author	Thread: profile review
littlemermaid589 View Profile History	profile review Posted : 28 Jul, 2009 07:03 PM hi guys, i was wondering if you wouldnt mind looking at my profile and let me know if i should change any thing.(about me, pictures, headline) i was just wanting a fresh set of eyes to llet me know if there was anything wrong...thanks for taking your time to read this and hope to hear from y'all. candice Post Reply
cartoonistmusician View Profile History	profile review Posted : 28 Jul, 2009 09:57 PM Hey! I looked at your profile and I thought it looked ok. :) There were some things I thought sounded like typos though. :) There's one place where you put "i love to work with children and hope to one day hope to be a teacher and do missions..." Would it sound any better to take one of the "hopes" out, like "i love to work with children and hope to one day be a teacher and do missions..." ? Or maybe, "i love to work with children and one day hope to be a teacher and do missions..." Ha. I don't know. I'm not an English wiz. :) Also when you said about your music, did you mean "amazing ways to serve Gods," or "amazing ways to serve God?" :) :glow: Just thought I would let you know. Yee! :rocknroll: Post Reply
littlemermaid589 View Profile History	profile review Posted : 28 Jul, 2009 10:10 PM thanks typos fixed Post Reply
View Profile History	profile review Posted : 29 Jul, 2009 12:04 AM HI CANDICE. I THOUGHT YOUR PROFILE WAS NICE. I DONT HAVE THE PERFECT PROFILE MYSELF BUT SINCE U ASKED, I THINK ALL YOUR PICTURES ARE NICE BUT THE ONE ON THE FAR END, THE VERY LAST ON THE RIGHT, TO ME, IS YOUR BEST AND SHOULD BE YOUR MAIN. IN ADDITION, I CAN CONFIRM THAT I READ YOUR WHOLE PROFILE,LOL. HOWEVER, I KIND OF GET THE FEELING THAT A FEW GUYS WONT, DUE TO THE LONG LIST OF FAV BANDS. I KNOW THAT THEY ARE ALL YOUR FAVOURITE, BUT I WOULD PERSONALLY SHORTEN THEM TO A TOP 10. I HOPE I HAVE BEEN OF HELP AND HAVE CAUSED NO OFFENCE. HAV A LOVELY DAY:waving: Post Reply
View Profile History	profile review Posted : 29 Jul, 2009 11:40 AM The 5th picture over is a little washed out. I would take it down and put another in it's place. I might ad a full picture of yourself also. Ditto on the music. Post Reply
littlemermaid589 View Profile History	profile review Posted : 29 Jul, 2009 12:53 PM i changedmy picture and exed the music thanks all for the advice... Post Reply
View Profile History	profile review Posted : 31 Jul, 2009 04:41 AM all great suggestions,but i like the third from the right better,it makes you look exotic! Post Reply
View Profile History	profile review Posted : 2 Aug, 2009 05:47 PM Awesome! Your profile looks good, and you seem like you'd be a really nice gal. I'd message you if you lived closer! Post Reply