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Profile review.Posted : 5 Apr, 2011 08:29 PMOkay, I've seen this done, at least guys have asked for profile reviews in Ask A Girl. Think one of you could give me one? Please be brutally honest if necessary. I feel like I'm doing something wrong. |
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Tulip89
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Profile review.Posted : 5 Apr, 2011 08:49 PMYou might get better results if you talk a little bit about why you like certain things instead of just listing what you like. Also, delete the sentences about not liking writing profiles and being more comfortable on the phone. It may be how you feel, but it's not really good for a profile. Other than that, I don't really see any problems with the profile itself. Maybe try a different default picture (the last one would probably work well) or switch in some newer, more different pictures. Everything you've got right now is essentially a headshot. |
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Profile review.Posted : 5 Apr, 2011 08:53 PMThank you, Tulip. Good advice, and I'll get right to work on that. |
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Profile review.Posted : 5 Apr, 2011 09:27 PMI agree with Tulip and maybe personal paragraph about yourself with longer sentences. :P |
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Profile review.Posted : 5 Apr, 2011 09:56 PMIt looks fine to me, Rachel. What's the reason you feel like you're doing something wrong? |
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Profile review.Posted : 5 Apr, 2011 10:08 PMI just wasn't having much luck, Chevy, haha. |
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Profile review.Posted : 5 Apr, 2011 11:21 PMI see you are fishing for a mate, and doing a fine job of it. For me you wouldn't even have to bait the hook, I'd put the hook in my mouth and tie a half hitch around my waist with the line. However I know you would say 'poor guy, this one's old, I think I'll practice catch and release.' So you would throw me back, then I would swim deep, turn and head for the surface picking up speed, gallantly breaking the surface of the water with gravity defying grace and landing at your feet. At which point you would say 'dumb fish, get out of here' grab me by the tail and knock my head against the side of the boat and throw me back in. |
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Profile review.Posted : 6 Apr, 2011 06:41 AMRachel, |
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Tulip89
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Profile review.Posted : 6 Apr, 2011 07:59 AMDon't get frustrated! I've been on here for probably over a year, and I rarely messaged girls, rarely got messages, and actually rarely even did a search to see if anybody new had joined. I just hung out on the forums and had fun. One of the girls I had messaged a while back facebook chatted me out of the blue recently though, and we've been talking pretty seriously ever since. |
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Profile review.Posted : 6 Apr, 2011 09:50 AMI agree with Tulip's first post. Talk a little more about your interests, and maybe a little more about what you're looking for in a man (if applicable). And definitely remove the part about hating online profile writing and preferring to talk on the phone. That would get creepers/scammers asking for your phone number, and you probably wouldn't want to give your number out without getting to know someone online first. |
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Profile review.Posted : 6 Apr, 2011 12:00 PMRachel, |
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