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A Poem Written By My 11 Year Old Son That Is Being Published
Posted : 1 Aug, 2009 06:24 PM

SILVER FORMING



Silver Silver, shining as a jewel,

Flowing swiftly acroos the land.

Like a gleaming eagle, soaring over the clouds

Slowly but surely, it is transforming the land

The harshest of rains turns to the gentlest snowfall.

A thick lather of shimmering snow blankets the land

In a breathtaking sight of pure majesty.

A raging storm changes to a flowing breeze of purist Silver

A glistening layer of new life hangs in the air

The tallest peak turns to a young mountain standing strongly.

As suddenly as a snow leopard captures its prey

All is changing

Silver ice molds itself into a glorious land of indescribable newness

Its shining beauty shuns all darkness and sorrow.



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My eleven year old son (he just turned twelve)

My son wrote this poem while in school. Then the school entered it into a national poetry competition. Meanwhile, I was never told anything about it. :goofball: I had no idea he'd ever even written a poem before. Months passed until one day I received an official looking letter in the mail with my son's name on it. I opened the letter and here's this poem (evidently written by my kid) with a notification that he'd won a national poetry contest, and that his poem was going to be published in a hard bound book!:excited: 1st I thought it was funny:ROFL: Then it hit me that this was actually pretty cool:peace: And then I couldn't believe I hadn't been told about this:angeldevil: Talk about being left out of the loop!

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Posted : 1 Aug, 2009 08:37 PM

That's awesome man. I had that happen to me when I was 16, I won a state poetry contest, without even trying. Now teach him to play guitar and he can be a song writer too 8)

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Posted : 2 Aug, 2009 07:17 AM

congratulation to you and your son!!! the poem is very, very beautiful. the boy has talent!!! i'm very happy for you guys.

May the Lord continue to bless your son with many talents!!!

thank you for sharing!!!





tristan-so that's what you look like. Hello my brother.



God Bless,

Zoe :angel:

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Posted : 2 Aug, 2009 04:35 PM

What an amazing poem. :yay: He has a lot of talent! I pray that he continues to write, and I'm with Tristan07...teach him to play guitar now.



~~KT

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Posted : 4 Aug, 2009 02:22 PM

very good job.. congrats.



GBU

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Posted : 1 Oct, 2009 06:07 PM

Hi Max,



What a wonderful experience for you, your son, and family. What a wonderful gift that God has blessed you son with, may he continue to grow and enjoy this great journey he is on.



In Christ,

Melissa:glow:

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Posted : 9 Nov, 2009 11:35 AM

In an enviroment where there's no father involved,the world undermines the mother. However give yourself a pat on the shoulder for you've empowered your child

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Posted : 2 Jan, 2010 11:48 PM

oooh thats very nice. i know ur vvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrry proud for him.i was impressed to ur son, am 19 and i dont even know how to write a poem like that.hope my son is like ur son.

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Posted : 2 Jan, 2010 11:50 PM

:applause:

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Posted : 5 Oct, 2012 06:20 PM

Excellent poem. only 11 yrs old, good job. We need more poets in the world.

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