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mewithoutYou lyrical analysis
Posted : 14 May, 2009 10:35 AM

Daniel broke the king's decree,

Peter stepped from the ship to the sea

there was hope for Job like a cut down tree,

I hope that there's such hope for me

dust be on my mind's conceptions

and anything I thought I knew

each word of my lips' description,

and on all that I compare to You



[the preference of the sun was

to the south side of the farm

I planted to the north in a terra-cotta pot

blind as I'd become, I used to wonder where you are -

these days I can't find where you're not!]



mine's been a yard carefully surface level tended foxes burrowed underground

my gardening so highly self-recommended,

what could I have done but let you down?



the sun and the moon,

I want to see both worlds as One!



mine's been a vivid story, dimly remembered

and by the hundredth time it's told, halfway true

of bad behavior well engendered

what good is each good thing we think we do?



[find a friend and stay close and with a melting heart

tell them whatever you're most ashamed of - our parents have made so many mistakes, but may we forgive them and forgive ourselves]



the sun and the moon are my Father's eyes (x1,000)





Just wanted to know everyone's interpretation on this =)

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mewithoutYou lyrical analysis
Posted : 7 Jun, 2009 10:15 AM

well, first off, i think that the last line being repeated 1000 times might end up a little monotonous. :D



other than that, though, i have to say this is pretty awesome.



i love the lines: "i used to wonder where you are - these days I can't find where you're not"



and i like the Biblical references too. good stuff!

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mewithoutYou lyrical analysis
Posted : 12 Jun, 2009 11:18 AM

haha well it's not literally 1000 time :-p



but yea



now just for the music part lol

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mewithoutYou lyrical analysis
Posted : 13 Jun, 2009 07:09 AM

im trying to do an acoustic version of this song, not really working out so far lol

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Posted : 25 Jun, 2009 12:45 PM

haha nice... well its definitely good. good luck with the music part. :D

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