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CENTER STAGE....YOU'RE ON !!! (POETRY) (SONGS)
Posted : 3 Aug, 2008 01:50 PM
Since this topic has been bouncing around, lets do it!
Now showcasing on this thread is the World's top poets performing for you live ! (for a few minutes, that is):applause:
Please remember that all materials should be original or credit given to the author. No material can be copied without the express permission of the author or you will be breaking one of the 10 Commandments! mmm...mmm..You might need to read up and figure out which one it is....
Ok...lets have some fun...and enjoyment!
THE MENTOR
I see as you are
Not with eyes of prejudice or fault
But with anticipation of your every move...
Your voice is like a melody waiting to be sung
I hang onto every note with envy
Contemplating the next harmonious passage...
Consumed by the thing I fear most
I relish in the fragrance of courage and strength
Emmanating from you and am totally captivated...
Deep within me lies the essence of your soul
That I might someday walk as you walk now
Never measuring another by wealth but rather by
character portrayed...
Love does not describe what you mean to me
My Teacher, Guide, and Friend
May I someday be the reflection of this Priceless Encounter!
( this poem was written about a very special teacher who helped me to recognize my potential...years ago)
Robin
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Posted : 15 Aug, 2008 05:59 AM
for there is no one else like you>>>>>
instead of waiting 3 days, I'll call ya in 2 .
How's that, hedgedweller ? :ROFL::ROFL::ROFL::ROFL:
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Posted : 15 Aug, 2008 04:40 PM
The Final Production
Poetry Class 101
Roses are red...
Violets are blue...
When I sneeze...
I go achoo...
Daffodils are yellow...
Daisies are mellow...
The tranquility I feel...
With you I reel...
In the biggest fishes, ever...
All because you are so clever...
I now know how to throw the line...
Just because you are so fine...
We're one of a kind...
I want you for mine...
For you I pine...
Just show me a sign...
If I could only see your face..
I would surely rest my case....
For there is no one else like you...
To make my heart go pitter, patter, too!
To you, dear, I will be true...
Instead of waiting 3 days, I'll call ya in 2 !!!!!!
Major compliments to Revelation 22...A+---We all knew you could do it...!
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Posted : 15 Aug, 2008 04:43 PM
Ok all you spy buddies looking in....how about giving poetry a try...It's not that hard....:peace:
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Posted : 15 Aug, 2008 04:59 PM
Thank you, strawberi
A little encouragement goes a long way.
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Posted : 15 Aug, 2008 08:07 PM
Here's a Few Hiku's from me to you..........
1.
Beyond the border
Lies a realm of existence
Will you fly with me....
2.
Today the moment
tomorrow the aching past
Was it worth the risk...
3.
The undeveloped
May seem the lowest level
Small seeds breed gardens...
4.
Silence in the mist
Beware of sleeping dragons
One bite and you're gone...
5.
Five ways pointing out
To choose the right way means hope
Otherwise I'm lost...
6.
My soul feels your song
Resounding melodies play
A masterpiece reigns...
7.
There is a city
Beyond it's borders lie faith
One step and I'm there...
8.
Speak easy to me
Tomorrow may never come
What counts is today...
Now then, how about a few Haiku from you???????
Robin
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Posted : 16 Aug, 2008 05:22 AM
Revelation22,,,,
your poetry is better too.
No more bleachers for you,,,,
I cant believe, you got me in this too.
And to which you have said,,
"for there is no one else like you>>>>>
instead of waiting 3 days, I'll call ya in 2 .
How's that, hedgedweller?" I say :rocknroll::rocknroll:.
Now Hiku's,,, Wow, did I spell that right,,, humm, hummm.
very very nice,,,, love 3 , 5 and 7.
7 is a big wow.
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I dont know what a hiku's are but here goes.
1. Christ in me, the hope of Glory.
I've never heard, of a sweeter story.
2. Christ eye's are my eyes, and his feet are my feet,
what a revelation, when every christian we meet.
3. I'm not gonna wait till I die,
in that sweet by and by,,,,,,
to enjoy what the lord has done for me.
A little throw back to Hee - Haw.
4. Where oh where, are you tonight,
Why did you leave me here all alone,
Then I searched the world over,,,,,,untill I found Gods love.
Then I heard the trumpet,,, and whooossshhh I was gone.
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Posted : 16 Aug, 2008 05:43 AM
hedgedweller,
You're really a poet.
You just didn't know it !:ROFL::ROFL::ROFL::ROFL::ROFL:
That HEE HAW add in is sheer genious:applause::applause:
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Posted : 16 Aug, 2008 06:02 AM
Haiku: First Line 5 syllables (beats)
Second Line 7 syllables (beats)
Third Line 5 syllables (beats)
That's it and I misspelled it in the previous post....!!!!!Ouch
Great posts...Keep it flowing....HeeHaw...:dancingp:
robin
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Posted : 16 Aug, 2008 07:22 AM
oh God help me,,, 5, 7, 5, ,, huh,,,i am totally lost,,, matter of fact,,, this is the same road I was on last night...
Yes I was lost then also,,,:yay::yay:help.
Ok you give us somemore HIKU's Strawberri,,, I just love them,,,#7 wow,,,,
So Rev22,,,,,,
I was a poet ,,,
and I didnt know it ,,,, hummm,
You are so right Revelation22.
Now I am getting so blue,,,
I wish you hadnt told me,,,,
I could've still been writing free.
Someone else needs to pick it up,,,
instead of leaving it to me,,,,,
So her you are__________???????
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Posted : 16 Aug, 2008 07:30 AM
a friend of mind is really enjoying reading all ya'lls funny replies on this post.....
we were just rolling last night,,, great going guys,,,,and girls,
see you on the other side,,, bruce,,(hedgedweller)
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