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Admin	Tell me what you think?? Posted : 9 Feb, 2010 08:24 PM I Can Only Imagine... I can only imagine how my savior must have felt. Going to the cross for a dying world, who needed help? I can only imagine how my savior must have felt, giving up his very life to save ours. I can only imagine how my savior must have felt, when he said� Father into your hands I commit my spirit.� I can only imagine how my savior must have felt, when one of his very own betrayed with a kiss. I can only imagine how my savior must have felt, when he bore the cross upon his back. I can only imagine how my savior must have felt, when they beat every stripe across his body. I can only imagine how my savior must have felt, when the crowd screamed �crucify.� I can only imagine how my savior must have felt, when they spit on and mocked him. I can only imagine how my savior must have felt, when he stretched his arms out for the world to know how much loves us. I can only imagine how my savior must have felt, when he heard the sinner beside him say� don�t you hear him, he is praying for you.� I can only imagine how my savior must have felt, when he completed the will of his father. I can only imagine what heaven will be like, but I know that Jesus labor was not in vein because on the third day he rose again. So I can only imagine how my savior must have felt? *** this is a poem written by me a few years ago and i was wondering what you thought about it??? Be honest i wont be mad if ur being honest!!!! Post Reply
View Profile History	Tell me what you think?? Posted : 12 Feb, 2010 10:40 AM lids 06 - that is beautiful...its free verse an from the heart...pro-writters/poets would break it down on critique, body an form...but this aint bout them...its bout the LORD an its perfect...xo Post Reply
modest View Profile History	Tell me what you think?? Posted : 13 Feb, 2010 08:50 AM Try to think of a being who would go out of tier way to create a world fully knowing how it would end. To know that man would fall, to know man could not do it all by his own. The bible tells us how it will end, it was written a long time ago. Beyond our thinking, if it wern't written then we would not even begin to understand. To allow the perfection of an angel to pull down one third of the angels, to strive torwards a relationship in a cereated living form. Whom will decide on his own if he will follow the LORD and submit to the most high. To give the gift to man a woman to cherish, to care for love and be as one. To mimic the same love that our loving Father wants to share when we come home. We are not to rule over a woman as a god but to build her up and hold her to our most highest standards. Though we men are weak in spirit we must overcome this, and only through the incouragement and some times a kick in the pants by a woman who will not allow failure, for a woman is born with determination this is for the mans benifit. We as men must not abuse our wifes, but uphold them to show the LORD that we are worthy of his love, to be as one! [I'm trying to get my photo installed]. Post Reply
View Profile History	Tell me what you think?? Posted : 22 Feb, 2010 09:59 AM i just wanted to saythat i am having this poem published :) Post Reply