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Another Profile Critique: Your information
Posted : 21 Mar, 2011 12:01 PM

Ladies, a lot of you put a nice list of interests in your profile and we can get a good idea what you enjoy doing both professionally and recreationally. However...



I'm gonna get some heat from some of you out there for this, but none of us should consider ourselves above criticism, and Scripture teaches that wise men are corrected and become wiser still. Fools are corrected and they mock you. Sooo... Some of you, unfortunately, employ empty cliches that tell us absolutely nothing about you and indicate little in the form of imagination or mental spark. Here's what I mean:



* I love to laugh (umm... who doesn't?)



* I love hanging with family and friends (again, who doesn't?)



* I live life to the fullest (Everyone tries to live their lives in the most fulfilling way they know how.)



None of this uniquely defines you. We want to know what you are about, and we need something deeper than the above list of "interests" to tell us that.



Your bio section's no different. A smiley face, "ask me", etc., are lazy. That in itself is a character description. You're relying on your photos alone. All I see is a cute girl with no depth. Unless you're only looking for attention, flirting or sexual interludes, please put more thought into your profile info.

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Another Profile Critique: Your information
Posted : 21 Mar, 2011 01:22 PM

:applause: You are right!

And every one of these applies to profiles of men posted on here. So..... it is not just the ladies who need to look over their profiles again and update them.

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Another Profile Critique: Your information
Posted : 21 Mar, 2011 01:30 PM

Men do this mess too? LOL! What is the matter with people?

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Posted : 21 Mar, 2011 01:31 PM

Oh... another one I like is "I like music..." Umm... yeah? Can you be just a TAD more specific?? LOL

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Another Profile Critique: Your information
Posted : 22 Mar, 2011 01:44 PM

Keithy, you make me laugh.

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Another Profile Critique: Your information
Posted : 22 Mar, 2011 05:01 PM

Or how about "I am interested in a lot of things. If you want to know more just ask."

Lame-o! Come on, you can write a sentence or two to give us at least a clue, can't you?? :laugh:

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Another Profile Critique: Your information
Posted : 23 Mar, 2011 05:37 PM

Hehehehehe....y shouldn't i say i love to laugh?...sound advice though...

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Another Profile Critique: Your information
Posted : 27 Mar, 2011 05:37 AM

MsMarvel, but do you LOVE to laugh? That's the question.

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Another Profile Critique: Your information
Posted : 27 Mar, 2011 07:42 AM

I'm gonna go ahead and add to the list any mention of how you can't be described in a box. Um...the idea isn't that I learn everything about you in 1000 words or less. It's that I get a snapshot of who you are so I can decide whether I'm interested enough to message you. This also applies to the phrase, "you really need to message me in order to get to know me."

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Posted : 27 Mar, 2011 04:52 PM

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