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Thatoneguy1983

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Posted : 19 Nov, 2010 05:50 PM

Hey ladies, I've noticed that several of the girls I've messaged have viewed my profile and then never even read my message. I'm sure that happens to everyone sometimes, but I was wondering if anyone would be willing to critique my profile. I'm not asking for a confidence booster (though I wouldn't be opposed to it), but anything that would make you just hit delete when I pop up on the screen. I understand it varied for everyone.



Also, which of the available pictures do you think should be my profile pic. Again, not asking you to rate me, just to pick one of the available pictures.



And don't worry about hurting my feelings. I'm pretty secure in who I am. Thanks for your help.

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Posted : 19 Nov, 2010 06:44 PM

Thatone:

You have good profile text and a good selection of photos. Your current main picture is probably the best to use. My only other suggestion is to post (as your main pic) the one that best shows how you are now. Some of your pics show facial hair and some don't. If you have some now - that should be your main pic.

The other suggestions I have is to change " I absolutely live kids " to "I absolutely love kids". You say a lot of good things -- I would take out the last line that says you don't like talking about yourself.

Hang in there and keep trying. We all experience the problem you have with people not replying.

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Posted : 19 Nov, 2010 09:04 PM

I don't really think I could add much to what GL said.

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Posted : 19 Nov, 2010 09:06 PM

I would suggest maybe talking a little about the type of woman you would love to marry. What are some of the things that are important to you in a relationship.

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Posted : 19 Nov, 2010 09:38 PM

Thanks for the feedback and encouragement. I made a few changes.

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Posted : 20 Nov, 2010 01:30 AM

You provided good info about yourself, but I see nowhere on your profile about you were talking about how important your relationship with God. Just my opinion :applause:

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Posted : 20 Nov, 2010 12:48 PM

Thanks for all the help.

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Posted : 20 Nov, 2010 04:39 PM

Definitely write what you want your relationship to be, do NOT write what woman you want to have. That, in my opinion, makes people look selfish.

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Posted : 20 Nov, 2010 07:27 PM

Siylii, Thanks for explaining what I meant better.

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Posted : 20 Nov, 2010 08:44 PM

Thanks for the clarity, revising again

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