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Input, please ... how do you like the changes I've made, the rewrites I've written for my profile?
Posted : 6 Oct, 2011 01:00 PM

Does it say just enough, too much or too little to be romantically attractive to "That Barefoot Special Gal" My Barefoot Romantic Heart is searching for here on CDFF?



I know your answers will be "just your opinions", of course ... but here's an opportunity to get to know me a little better for those of you who don't know me as well as others here do ... and to share your hearts with me about my updated profile.



Thanks, Everyone!!! :hearts:



Steve

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Input, please ... how do you like the changes I've made, the rewrites I've written for my profile?
Posted : 6 Oct, 2011 07:14 PM

Hey Steve - I like the changes you made. My only suggestion is to shorten the paragraphs about books/magazines and music. Listing all the detail gives a bit too much information. Save some of that detail for when you are getting to know someone. I like the descriptions of your pictures also. If you shorten the text (take out some of the detail) it will make it easier and faster to read. Reading the small words on a screen is hard enough without having to read many paragraphs. And, people with smart phones would have a real hard time reading all of that text.

Just my suggestions Barefoot Man! :waving:

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Posted : 7 Oct, 2011 09:31 AM

Hey back at cha, godslamb!!! :waving:



Thanks for your suggestions, Barefoot Woman!!! :hearts:



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